Thursday, 11 July 2013

ArShi SS ~ The Charmer and his Lady ~ Part 19



Part 19

Judaii

She stared walking blankly in the busy roads and kept on tripping and bumping with people, earning few profanities from them. Few were kind enough to ask her whether she was ok by patting her shoulder. She stared at them blankly as if her world has fallen apart and she had nothing left for her.
She fought her tears back and promised herself that she wont cry. There was nothing to cry. Ek na ek din yeh to hona hi tha. Wasnot she the one who placed the no-strings-attached idea before him? Wasnot she the one who made it clear to him that she doensot want any attachment? Then where is his fault no? He never asked to fall in love with him. It was her choice to do so. Now that she had hopelessly fell in love with him, it was her mistake. Mistake? No it wasnot a mistake. Love cannot be a mistake. Love for a man like Arnav cannot be a mistake. Every time every moment she lived with him was wonderful. He was wonderful. He had never ever made any situation uneasy between them. And his charm, his body, his soul, it was just perfect. He was the man every women would desire. No doubt why each and every lover of him never wanted to leave him.
The little did Khushi knew why his ex-girlfriends never wanted to leave him. It was the power of his money that they craved for. Being Raizada’s girl-friend meant huge money spent behind them. But for Khushi it was their togetherness, their cute fights over non-issues, their passionate nights where they melted into each other and their special moments where they discuss few personal things. It was pure love for Khushi which she was going to miss.
Lavanya kashyap was girl who deserved to be Mrs Raizada, Arnav’s future wife. Khushi chocked with the thought. Mrs Raizada, Arnav’s better half. Did not she feel the same when she was with him during last 6 months. Did not she feel it was she who was could have been best fit for him? But how could she? How could she expect him to commit to her when she was second hand? Yes she was. She was married to someone else. Thought it was not legally done, but still her husband applied sindoor in between her partition. Their parents accepted that marriage. Even she was his wife till she was tired of waiting for him. She never allowed any other man to touch her physically and emotionally until Arnav happened.
Her marriage was like a curse for her, neither she could take it nor she could leave it and today it was a major hiatus for Arnav and her relationship. Lavanya was un married and beautiful, much more attractive and much more fashionable than she was. By their pictures together she was sure that they would make a good pair. But the thought made her heart swell. Her Arnav was never her Arnav. He was meant to be someone else’s.
Nausea hit her hard and she threw it out in the dustbin feeling extremely sick. The thought of someone will be bedding with him soon made her nerve loose. She had dealt with his past, but now that she had been with him for last 6 months and sharing not only his bed but also his life, his need it was hard for her to take the situation so easily.
She glanced up the hotel where Arnav had called her and decided to seat for a while for the nausea to go away. Drinking some water she picked up her mobile. Looking at their picture taken in Maldives when they had visited there for the first time, she couldn’t hold back her tears. She realized that Arnav made her weak. The whole thing, the whole six months made her weak. A tear dropped right at the center of the screen in between their faces, where Khushi was kissing him on his cheeks holding him tightly. The picture was taken by Arnav as Khushi’s both the arms were wrapped possessively around his neck.
“This has to end” her mind said. For their good, for their relationship sake. She did not want to spoil it. She never thought of spoiling it. How could she after all she loved him so much. So much that she even did not know until today.
Khushi decided to talk to him and end it in a happy note so that both doesnot regret this. It had to end, so let it end in a good note. She had her best time with him and that was more then enough for her to survive.
But not like this. Not in some hotel which had no soul. She wanted to end it either at her house, of at his place. Being misha present in her house, that wouldnot be possible. Then why not at his guest house? She thought.
She punched his number and waited for him to pick up the phone.
“Khushi!” he called her in a husky, frustrated voice.
“Arnav” she addressed him painfully.
“Come fast, I need to talk to you”.
“Arnav, can we please go to your guest house? I am not comfortable in the hotel” she said clutching her phone with both her hands.
“Guest house?” Arnav thought that wasnot possible as Lavanya was staying there. “it is not possible today Khushi”.
Khushi frowned in irritation and thought why, why wasnot it possible to meet him in the guest house, when they had always been there. Could it be possible that his future wife was staying there?
The urge of nausea came back once again. Could it be possible that he was sharing the same bed with her during weekdays while he was warming his bed with Khushi during weekends? Did they already made love? If yes then was it as good as they do? Did he…. She chocked… did he made her cry out his name like he does with Khushi?
“yes Arnav, is there a problem in that?”
Arnav did not want to tell her that Lavanya was staying in the guest house yet because he wanted to be with Khushi when he tells her the truth. The entire truth about lavanya.
“Where are you Khushi?” he asked her planning to take her to his home.
“I am right near the hotel. I don’t want to entire there and look like some whore Arnav”.
“Shut up Khushi. How dare you use such a cheap word?” Arnav was shocked, stunned by Khushi’s words. His Khushi can never say such a cheap word. He panicked at the thought that maybe she came to know about lavanya and that’s why she spatted out that word. “stay where you are I am picking you up”.
Arnav disconnected the phone and tossed his BMW key and rushed out of the suite.
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He scratch stop the car in front of Khushi and puffed the engine by pushing the acceleration making it sound like a growl.
Khushi opened the door and let herself in. and the moment she was in he zoomed the car in high speed.
He kept on glancing at her and she was looking straight not meeting his eyes. He kept on pacing the car until they arrived at his house.
Khushi did not recognize where he had brought her. She opened her mouth to ask. Her words muffed up against his hard smooch. He dug his fingers in her skin and brutally inserted his tongue inside her sweet mouth. His kiss was so hard and yet it was so passionate that she had tars in her big doe eyes.
He could sense her lips trembling against his lips but he did not stop. He wanted to punish her for using such a bad word. And his punishment was his brutal kiss.
He pulled himself back to check her finally. Feeling bad looking at her bruised lips he pecked her lovingly and cupped her face. “Never ever us that word Khushi. You made me mad by telling that. Did I ever made you feel so cheap of yourself?”, he said in a low voice which sounded more like a chocked voice.
Khushi slowly picked her lashes up and nodded in negative sheepishly.
Arnav kissed her forehead and then wiped her tears. “sorry for the kiss”, he said and did not wait anymore. He got down from the car and held the door open for her.
Without giving her an opportunity to place her foot on the groud he swept her up in his arms and headed towards the entrance.
Khushi was so lost in Arnav that she forgot about the house.
Once she was placed on the bed she realized that it was someone’s house. Not a guest house.
“if you are wondering where I have brought you let me tell you this is my house and this is my bedroom and..” she leaned on her dangerously “this is my bed where you are sitting right now”.
Khushi gasped at their proximity. Arnav has never failed to make her jump like a rabbit whenever he seduced her out of the oddest situation possible.
But Khushi knew it very well, if she did not ask him now, she can never ask him in future. He was answerable to her after spending 6 months together. She felt that he was as easy as she was with him and there was no harm in asking him.
“Why did not you tell me earlier? Why did you hid such a big news? Did you think I will create a scene and bad mouth you Arnav? Why I had to read the news about you?” Khushi asked him in one breath.
Just as Arnav thought, the news had spilled the beans already. Wasn’t he the one wanted to do that what Khushi asked? Wasn’t he the one hoping that Khushi will hear the news first hand from him. But how could he stop her from reading it in the newspaper when it is all over the city?
“Khushi I wanted to tell you…”she hard him defending himself but she spatted out in anger.
“When? After your marriage? Or after you share your bed with her in your suhaag raat?” she got up and leveled her eyes with him.
Arnav gripped her shoulder painfully, “how dare you. how dare you talk to me like this?”. Arnav couldnot believe that out of all the people Khushi will not think about the situation. She was the last person to react so negatively he thought.
“What is wrong in the thinking Arnav? I wont be surprised if I hear that you are already sleeping with her”.
Arnav felt a stab, a sharp stab in her heart. How could she think about him like that? How could she think that he was two timing her? How could she even think that when it was Khushi writing all over him, he will go to someone else, forget about bedding that person. Arnav felt betrayed. Betrayed about Khushi’s behaviour. He thought he was wrong about thinking that Khushi was the only person who understood him and always given him benefit of the doubt. But he was wrong. She was just like other feisty, impulsive girl-friends. He knew it, it was over now and he cannot handle such situation. What amazed him was how could he live with a woman for 6 months? And he still craved for her more and more. Right now also he felt like pushing her on the bed and fill her with him hard and fast and take out the stupid bug from her head. But no he wont do that because he was terribly hurt and he said what he shouldnot have.
“don’t try to invade in my personal things Khushi. If you think that I have already fucked her then be it, I will not explain you about what I do with others”. He immediately cursed himself for being such an ass.
“I don’t wish to listen to it Arnav. I don’t want to listen to anything. I am sure you must have felt good while putting yourself inside her and I am sure you must have enjoyed the view of her voluptuous breast jerking up and down when she rode on you” and there she goes couldnot stop her tears anymore.
Arnav slid his hand inside his pocket so that he doesnot do anything inappropriate to her like hitting her for what she had said. He felt pathetic at that moment.
“So be it Mr Raizada, congratulations for your wedding and a goodbye from me”, Khushi felt pathetic to. She did not know from where those words came out from her mouth. She was the last person who would want to say such a thing and that to the person she loved the most.
“Khushi listen to me”, Arnav tried to talk to her and explain her that what she was thinking was all wrong, that she should listen to him and then decided. But she was almost unlocking the door.
“No Mr Raizada”, don’t try to stop me now. to be your mistress is the last thing I want. I understand that marriage was something we have never decided upon and I understand we would have never been married, that’s how how relation was. But not that you are going to get married and now that you have found your soul mate I don’t think it would be appropriate for me to be with you anymore. I wish you a very happy marriage life..” before she could utter further. Arnav hauled her and turned her towards him.
He jammed her hands and locked it like hand calves on the either side of her face and barked.
“NEITHER CAN I MARRY YOU NOR CAN I MARRY ANYBODY. I AM ALREADY MARRIED DAMN IT AND I LOVE MY WIFE MORE THAN ANYTHING, MORE THAN YOU. NO ONE CAN TAKE HER PLACE IN MY LIFE…SAMJHI TUM? KOI NAHI”.
Khushi was shocked. She felt loss of words. His eyes were dangerous and scary. She has never seen him like this before.
“He was married?” she thought…”then what was he doing with her. Where is his wife? Why isnot there any information about his marital life? If he loves his wife so much then why was he  sleeping around with other females?”
“you…you are married? Where…where is your wife?” she chocked her words.
“SHE IS DEAD DAMN IT. BUT THAT DOESNOT GIVE ME LICIENCE TO MARRY SOMEONE ELSE. THAT DOESNOT TAKE AWAY MY LOVE FOR HER. I LOVE HER VERY MUCH AND I WILL CONTINUE TO LOVE HER TILL MY LAST BREATH”, he lied. He knew he lied. He equally loves the woman who was standing in front of him. He loves Khushi so much that he couldn’t face his wife’s photo which he religiously did every morning. But this woman who stood in front of him got it all wrong. Everything wrong. And he knew if he doesnot let he go now the scene would turn ugly.
“YOU HAVE HEARD ENOUGH AND I HAVE SAID WHAT I HAD IT. NOW JUST GET OUT OF HERE. I DON’T NEED ANYONE. GET. THE. FUCK. OUT. OF. HERE”.
Streams of tears were not stopping anymore. She felt miserable and hurt. Such a big confession and he did after 6 months. But somehow the whole confession concerned her today. She felt ashamed of herself for being such an impulsive person. She knew she had hurt him a lot. But her respect for him touched the ultimate. He man who loves and wife even after she was dead and promising himself that he will never give that space to anyone proved how intense the person was. Arnav singh Raizada was a gem and Khushi had crushed it with her own hands.
Without any further delay she unlocked her locket, his love gift and separated it from her skin. It was the saddest moment in her lift. Parting that locket from herself was equivalrnt to part one of her body part. There was no physical pain, but emotionally she was crushed forever. She bundled the locket in his palm and turned to open the door, and before he could stop she ran out of his house.
Arnav held his hand to stop her and call her back but he could not. He was devastated. He turned to glance at the crumbled bed sheet where she sat and lost all his control over his emotions. He touched the area and punched it hard. “DAMN IT Khushi! Come…..back” he chocked before letting his tears fall apart for the first time in his life.

102 comments:

  1. That was a shocking revelation by Arnav and now they have messed up their relationship.

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  2. just read the update. very intensely written. after hearing arnav's outburst somewhere i my mind i got a doubt that kushi is his wife. if that is the situation, then looking forward how you will reveal this side. eagerly waiting for the next update

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  3. ohooo Arnav is crying .... :(
    and Khushi is also in so much pain ... !!!
    Awesume update ... :)
    i hope so Arnav is married to Khushi in childhood and think that Khushi is dead .... :)

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  4. Woah!!! Pleej update soon!!!!! This time!!!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese!!!!

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  5. THT WS A SHOCKING REVELATION... Arnav is MARRIED??? I wud say tht dere relationship is goin thru a rough phase n I hope dey realise dere LUV 4 each other soon... Dey r made 4 each other...

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  6. is it tht arnav is married to khushi? tht would be awesome.... but very painfull update :(

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    1. and ya pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon

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  7. they have messed it...
    they mature...but still love is something...
    which makes you so weak...yet strong...

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  8. aw.......soooooooo emotional :-(

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  9. totally heart breaking chapter..... :'( :'(
    Specially Arnav's tear and his "come back khushi" made me cry :'( :'(

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  10. y if he loved his wife
    y he was with khushi
    y he is going to marry lav

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  11. rimi(rimirocks)11 July 2013 at 20:17

    omg appy,u swept me with all my emotions,so intense!!!!pls tell me khushi is indeed his wife ,or i wont b able 2 sleep tonight

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  12. Both are such strong headed individuals. ... jumping on conclusions is their specialty. ... loved the update...

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  13. Both are such strong headed individuals. ... jumping on conclusions is their specialty. ... loved the update...

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  14. wow.. wht an emotional update... its surprising tht khushi didnt give arnav a chance to explain... no wonder arnav is hurt, and he as usual being the jerk pushed her away,...
    now who will ask sorry first?

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  15. sad update.......

    OMG such a big disaster......
    arnav has a wife.....
    she died...he loves her....
    khushi devastated.......
    khushi shattered ...
    khushi hurt.......
    arnav ruined by his loss of words....
    update soon..........

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  16. OMG....Arnav Married and his wife died :(
    But then who is Lavanya? and why she is in Arnav's guest house?
    So many question..and one solution is your next update :)
    Waiting for that ....awesome update
    Shilpa Das(FB)

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  17. omg...arnav s married and his wife is dead *shock*
    then how did lavanya come in scene...
    everything is messed up now...
    i wish he stops her and she doesn t go..
    marvelous update *claps*
    update the next soon dear :)

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  18. Awww Arnav is married and his wife is dead . Khushi I feel really bad for you dear. Appy amazing update

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  19. well that is a shocking chapter....Arnav is married....was wondering what secret he's gonna reveal....never expected this....they both realized they love each other....but cant confess....such a sad & emotional update.....and this judaii....its painful....update soon again......

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  20. :'(
    Sad one.... :'(
    Si its Khushi with whom he us married bt thinks that she is dead...???
    Pls continue soon..
    Can't see them separate.... :(

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  21. woooww it was intense... loved it...

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  22. SUCH A SHICKING REVELATION i never thought sometging like this
    Arnav married ??
    I just hope that khushi is his wife and he thinks shes dead
    But tje photograph he was talkting about urghh
    I wish its khushi

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  23. wow that was superb.. hope they both understand each other feelings.. khushi really behaved impulsively against her nature before listening to what arnav have to say and arnav master of anger he toh won't even try to anybody make understand his point of view so not surprised over his action.. but felt bad for both...

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  24. So was it Khushi he wad married to but he thinks that she is dead? What the hell happened? What will happen now?

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  25. OMG Arnav is Already Married and his wife is Dead
    ye kya hogaya yar Arshi ko itna kuch keh diya
    At last Arnav Dialog is 'Come Back Khushi' :'(
    Abh kya hoga Thoda jaldi update karona yar iss bar

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  26. OMG!!!!! Arnav is married and his wife is dead....yeh kya ho raha hai.
    Very sad conversation...felling really sorry for Khushi
    An amazing update dear!!!!!
    Please please please update soon

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  27. so that was the secret now lets see what happens next pls update soon

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  28. So shocking news for me..interesting waiting for the next..

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  29. Its goin more n more mystrius n suspensiv.... OMG..... m goin on imagining d frthur story....
    funny

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  30. OMG arnav's outburst was mind blowing and so painful but it wasnt khushi's fault she was hurt as well but he just spat everythng on her :(
    And about the marriage thing i guess his wife is khushi and now im eagerly waiting for the turn which you will make suspicious for us!!!!!!!! Ohhh plzzzz update soon so excitd for next update:)

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  31. damn dis is such a bigggg revealation....
    Arnav is married nd his wife is dead but whom he is married to..????
    Is it khushi by any chance..????
    No it cannot b coz aftr khushi came in his life he has stopped looking at his wife's photograph which he used to do evry mrng....!
    Den who is dat lady..????
    Mystery follows....!
    Lovely chappy indeed....!
    Oh goddd dis is written so damn instensely....
    their love for each other is so pure but yet they could not xpress it...!
    Loved d chappy....!
    Its simply worth d wait....!
    I cant wait for d nxt chappy now....

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  32. awesome .
    I dont know how, but I think Khushi is Arnav's wife ;)
    do update soon

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    1. this is ajoop
      india forums :)

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  33. Oh... that was unexpected. May be Arnav was married to Khushi? If that is true, then how can he love his wife so much, when he has not spend much time with her? Will wait for the next update...

    IF Id: Pinkly

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  34. OMG! What an unexpected turn of events. Arnav is married and is still in love with his dead wife?
    Woah! I never would have expected that.
    As for the pair of them they have now gone and ruined their relationship. All I can think of is what now?

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  35. i dont know y but i am right now feel like crying...heart is paining for both arnav and khushi

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  36. Damn both are so tied up in their pain that they just lash out and hurt each other more
    Such an emotional roller coaster

    I think Khushi is his wife, but he thinks she is dead

    now their so called relationship is on the rocks

    can't wait for the next part

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  37. Wow!!!!!! That was simply amazing!!!!!!

    I have a feeling either his wife is khushi whose pic is when she was little or either ur going to put a really big twist in this!!!

    Omg it hurt to see Arnav cry..... :'(

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  38. di plz update soon it just getting intense with each passing update
    plz make khushi arnav wife plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  39. and this update is worth waiting....!!!
    it was beyond brilliance, amazing, wonderful
    iv no words to tell u how good u have written
    and it was painful... i really hope arnav is married to khushi
    waiting till everything settles :)

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  40. OMG!! Arnav was married and his wife s dead??!

    But could it be that Khushi is his wife but he think that she is dead? But then he mentioned a picture too that he looked at every night before he met khushi. So confusing...

    Now Khushi has left and he didn't stop her because he couldn't believe that she would act like this,he wanted to but couldn't ..what happens now? Arnav is crying ....
    This is really sad, two people really hurting ...

    Can't wait for the story to unfold more and get more questioned answered...

    Loved it!!! Brilliantly written and expressed beautifully ....

    IF- Hawa1997

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  41. Hi I am orchids8888 from IF.

    Update is very intense.

    This revelation is totally unexpected. Arnav is married and his wife is dead. I feel Arnav does not know truth. I feel Khushi is Arnav's wife. He is having her childhood photo. Hence the confusion.
    Arshi have destroyed the relation. I feel Arshi need to mature. I hope Arnav realises he loves Khushi and Khushi realises her love for Arnav.

    I did not understand Lavanya confusion.

    Please update.

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  42. ASR's wife dead! I wish not! I wish that wife were Khushi only! [IF: Arshisarunfan]

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  43. arnav is married.... does by any chance khushi being his wife and he was thinking she is dead??????
    awesome update

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  44. wow...what a shocking revelation :O

    Why do I think Khushi is his wife and Arnav believes she is dead somehow but in fact she is not...

    Please update soon :)

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  45. that was shocking to know arnav's revelation , felt bad for arshi now they knew their own feelings for each other . i hope they will communicate n things will be better soon

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  46. OMG that was such a shocker update
    Arnav had a wife
    He still loves her
    He does not want to marry anyone
    He loves khushi too.
    But if he still loves his wife then why he was sleeping around with other women...
    Why he not remained loyal to his dead wife by not sleeping with every other girl. Her in my opinion Arnav is entirely at fault. Though its khushi's fault too
    any ways it was an awesome update
    continue soon

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  47. Lovely!
    I dnt knw why but ive a feeling that khushi is his wife whom he thinks is dead!
    Would love to see how the story unveils!:D

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  48. Oh my god.. M speechless appy...
    super duper fantastic update..
    like I van never imagine this twist....
    Arnav marreid.... N his wife is no more.... Den what is suspence about dt news to he is getting marry to lavanya...
    poor khushi she loves him lot but cant tell him...
    hope everything will be okey soon as they cant live without eachother... They r truly I love...
    superb... U r just fab writer...
    I love it...

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  49. Wow!! I loved it...n it was sooo intense!! Pleasee update sooon

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  50. Wow..its gr8.. Arnav loved his wife. N I.e khushi ....i know....

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  51. Wow..its gr8.. Arnav loved his wife. N I.e khushi ....i know....

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  52. OMG!!what a surprising update!!Arnav is married n loves hiss wife for eternity..hmm..a really emotional one...
    -aryancha(I-F user)

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  53. Wow, very intense and emotional update with Arnav's shocking revelation! They ended up hurting each other so much! I couldn't help but to cry! I wonder what happened in the past? And why and how did his wife died?! Maybe it was a misunderstanding or someone lied to him about it! I still hope Khushi is his wife! That would explain why Khushi's husband never came back for her believing that she died! Eagerly waiting for the next part! Thank you so much for this excellent update, Appy!!

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  54. emotional update so sad khushi broken after seeing the news and arnav was married and he told her no one can take her place arnav and his anger so sad heart breaking update

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  55. It's a fab update and such big a revelation

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  56. Arnav already married and loved his wife dearly???

    Uhhh oo how dis things get this messed up between them

    Amazinggg update!!!

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  57. Hi! Appy how r u dear?i am sory for taking so long to read your updates,..i am very busy,my job,colge/exams,and mariage of my younger bro n sis,i didnt have time to read your updates,bcoz of so much work that sumtime i even have no time for take my meal..now i m free form mrige rituals n shopng,so i can read n enjoy n comment...anyways coming back to the story...there is so many things i lv about the parts that i might run out of space wrting them down...all of them were just amazning.n da last one is emotional,they were in pain..waitng 4 next update,i want it cum fast becoz i cannot bear to watch these two sad n upset after all the love n passnate moments spent together...n i think arnav wife is khushi..

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  58. Omg that was a shocking update
    i think khushi is arnav's wife
    their might be sme mu being arnavs wife being dead.
    update sooon plzzzz

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  59. n one questn,yar when wil u continu or update your story best frnd?becoz dat story is on of da best story n i love the idea of dat story...thanx for da update,i realy mis this story...GOD bless u dear

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  60. Omg such an emotional update.
    Feel sooo bad for kushi and arnav. They should of at least heard each other out before running away. The scene of the necklace just tore me apart. I hope arnav soon finds out his wife who he loves till this day is alive and is kushi.
    Plz update soon

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  61. Wow, Appy. Updated after so long and I am really glad this one was as emotional and volcanic as it deserved to be.. too good, just too good. I am glad Khushi ran away after parting with the locket, that's the most natural reaction. anyways.. now I would love to read the next udpate soon. So ,please post the next udpate soon. Thanks-Prasu

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  62. Ufff Appy awesomeeee Update.. Please update soon otherwise i'll get heartattack :D


    IF-SaharAli

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  63. Arnav and married?? though he loves his wife still inspite of she being dead how can he behave like a playboy?
    I wish khushi being his dead wife but then I remember u had posted some question answer long back tht they are not couples

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  64. Quite a twist in the story Appy!!, Thanks for the update. It was hard to see ASR and Khushi fight.

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  65. Emotional update...feeling bad for both of them

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  66. awesuly emotional updt...sure arnav is married to khushi only....continue sooon
    ushankitvc

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  67. Emotional & Touchy update...
    Both have feeling 4 eachother but they couldn't give it a name "THE LOVE" because of their past" THE MARRIAGE"...but i m sure they are married to eachother.
    update soon. Can't wait 4 ur stories, u have taken so much time 4 this update & i m addicted 2 it.
    IF jdd1959

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  68. Omg!!!...it was shocking.....
    N der udai!!... Heart breaking......:-(
    Plz update soon...
    nirmal1992

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  69. awesome updt and shocking also

    updt soon

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  70. u r jst awesme!!!!simply awesme!!!!

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  71. Awesome update... Arnav is married..n khushi too say dat her husband is der n waiting for his return... Can it b dat dey were married in childhood n de seperated for sum reason.. N arnav thot she is dead... Omg..cant wait for next update.. Plz update soon..

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  72. wat the..!! he says he luvs his wife....will luv her till end.................yet sleeping around wid others!! if he can satisfy his need widout get mrd.........if he can fall in luv wid khushi othr than his dead wife.....then wats the need of portraying himself as saint..!! he has not stop luving others.... ..neither he stoped living for himself...due to his wifes departure..wat kinda luv is this...so why being hypocrite..!

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  73. WOW, it was just AMAZING !!!!
    Each and every sentence displayed the grief and sadness, each one of ARNAV and KHUSHI felt.
    SUPERBBBBBBBBB .....
    want to read more !!!!
    plz plz do update fast
    Dont knw why i have a feeling that Arnav is only khushi's husband, .... exciting !!!!!!!
    <<<<<<< UPDATE >>>>>> UPDATE <<<<<<< UPDATE >>>>>>>>
    ~ naturelove

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  74. Appyy............Emotional update... But, I loved it... Whats a story without any twist... Will be waiting for the next update

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  75. Sorry for late comment... just server probs thats why... Di I think Arnav's dead wife is Khushi..... & Omg he is married still lots of afair... I think that New about his & Lavnya''s marriage is fake...or it is true??? Poor Khushi now what will she do.. Awesome update di.. lage raho...

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  76. i wish his dead wife's name is khushiiiii

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  77. God it's so painful to see both of them like this. I think Khushi is his wife. But why did arnav said that his wife is dead .
    What had happen in past with them that they got separated .
    But their separation today was more painful.
    Don't know how they will work together now.
    Thanks for the wonderful update.


    Archnahardik123 (IF )

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  78. I am sure they were married to each other while they were young,but why does he feel his wife is dead?Did someone lie to him.Thanks for an emotional update.Khushi was mean to him, she needs to grovel.ha,ha

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  79. ohh!! such a painful part...but i am sure that arnav and khushi are married to each other...i can't see them separated please don't separate them and clear their misunderstandings soon...waiting for more...

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  80. update soon dear..............nyc part....

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  82. Gosh.... vry emotional n full of suspense chptr.. waitng vry eagerly for nxt updte... plz plz plz updte soon.

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  83. that was another damakha
    he was married before was that childhood marriage
    were their any misunderstanding that girl might be khushi
    im hoping n prying for that

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  84. very intence update i bm feeling that arnav is kushi husband is it tru waiting how u unfold the suspence thanx

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  85. Its soooo imotional update.........

    is he marry other gril or it is Khushi.....but if it khushi then after seeing his wife pic every morning he cunt recognised her....

    update soon............

    waiting impatiently.........

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  86. I swear I could have never guessed that the story will take this turn. Other woman in picture was predictable but a married ASR was nvr in my mind. Awesome!!!!!
    Two heartbroken souls is devastating, plz update soon...

    Blablabla_mo7 IF

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  87. Nice update... So Arnav is already married, so as per my earlier guess.. Arnav will be her husband and there might be some mis-communication/understanding that Khushi is dead. Will Khushi get to know that she is his wife by any chance looking at his wife's photo. They have parted ways and this might help them in realizing the true feelings for each others. Looking forward to see how you are going to reveal his wife's identity and his love for Khushi.

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  88. awesome update
    felt bad for khushi
    oh so arnav is married and also loved her wife
    I am sure arnav and khushi are husband and wife and they were childhood friends that's why arnav said he loves his wife and he may have some misunderstanding that khushi is also died and here, khushi thinks that her husband forgot her but the problem is we don't know the name of their spouses so have some doubt
    update soon appy plz

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  89. omgg such an emotional update !!!!!

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  90. great update but cant blame khushi also, loved misha she is so understanding as a friend, and now arnav is in pain, how is he going to gether back (IF user id laksh65)

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  91. Wow. Intense update. Loved it.

    - desisweetheart9 from IF.

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  92. Apply di...waiting for an update....pls update soon...

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  93. yes evil u cliffhanger pe chod diya!!! wen will u update???

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  94. appy di update i m dyingggggggggggggggg
    pleassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    lovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuu

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  95. oh dear lord the heartbreak my eyes are filled with tears right now i just sucks this thing doesn't have emoticons but wow,good chapter it really pulled up some emotions in me

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  96. Hi
    Can you give link or invitation to read your other stories pls..
    Thank you

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