Monday, 22 July 2013

ArShi SS ~ The Charmer and his Lady ~ Part 20



Part 20

The Charmer and his lady 


For the first time in last two week, Arnav was looking forward to this day. After all it was the day which Khushi wont be able to avoid him like last two weeks. It has been pathetic. Khushi coming to the same office but avoiding Arnav as if he doesn’t exists. During the joint meeting he tried to communicate with her in professional level only to get her monosyllables back with few deliberate taunts. But unlike every other times Arnav enjoyed her fuming and angry looks that she threw on him constantly. He loved how her face used to turn red when he tried to pull her leg indirectly in the meeting. But no words come out from her mouth. After that horrifying incident where he said he loves his wife more than Khushi, which had been an out right, lie, he just couldnot forgive himself. And moreover when he asked her to get out her knew it was final nail to the coffin. But he was Arnav singh Raizada, and he knew that he will make her beg for him at the end. His gut feeling was that the passion, the desire that he had for her, she had the same urge to be with him. And past two weeks had proved that so. He had ofen caught her looking at him when he was engrossed in his office work, some times mutting something which was barely audiable and then her famous pout which melted his heart. If he wanted her would have taken her then and there and proved that he was right, that she wants him as much as he wants her. But he backed off thinking to give her sometime to settle down and let the reality hit her.
And the reality hit her every second. Be it staring at the white ceiling at night, feeling pathetically hollow not being in his arms, missing making breakfast for him. She almost had a panic attack not able to speak to him despite of working so close to him in the office and still managing to keep her hands off.
This was the day both were eagerly looking forward to. More than Khushi it was Arnav. After all it was the stone lying ceremony of their joint project and whether she liked it or not she have to stay close to him and give her interviews with him. He was the financer and the architectural firm where as hers was interior design. He held almost 70 percent of the stake in the project, so he had an upper hand always. If he wanted he would have null the contracted and given it to someone else. But he did not do it. It was not for her, she dismissed her tiny hope that he loved her as much as she did by thinking Arnav singh Raizada was a man of principles and he would never effect his professionalism by mixing it with his personal issues.
They had been lovers but they were colleagues too and she knew she was stuck with him till the project was over. It was her greatest opportunity to do something abroad and she would have been an emotional fool to walk out. If she could leave her past behind and be strong then she would be able to leave behind this Arnav singh Raizada bug from her life.
But this bug was more than anything for her. The more the days passed, the more she got restless about the whole fiasco.
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“hey devi maiya rakhsha karna” Khushi looked at the sky then felt a slender arm wrapping her. Khushi looked at misha and smiled sheepishly. It had been worse for her. She fought with misha over Arnav many times in last two weeks and finally decided not to speak to her at all. But misha never let Khushi go away from her as she knew, it was misha who had to be with her when she had no one to confide. She also knew it was the toughest phase in Khushi’s life and other than misha there was no one to make her understand. Unlike Khushi and Arnav, misha was quite aware of their chemisty. Not only chemistry but the hidden love between the duo. No matther how much Khushi denied the fact that Arnav doesnot love her, by the situation was screaming into her ears that no one in this world can love her more than Arnav. It was evident that the Casanova who had changed his boyfriends like clothers have not been advertised on the newspaper for past six months and no one had any clue about Khushi in his life. He had made sure to safe guard her moral at any cost and that proves a lot Even during last 2 weeks their had been no news about Arnav and his girl-friends which was again a proof that there had been none after Khushi.
“don’t worry khush! You look stunning. Uncle and Aunty would have been so happy to see you today achieving so much on your own. Trust me they are”.
“You…you think so mish?” she stammered nervously seeing the paparazzi clouded over the entrance of Raizada Mansion.
Arnav has organized the whole finction in Raizada mansion instead of any other five star hotel. Khushi initially refused to agree to it but later sighed protesting much. She just did not want to enter that house which had taken away her most precious relation and facing that house, the same evil…. No her mind scream. No matter how much he she cursed Arnav, but she just couldnot stop loving him. And that was the greatest truth, which hit her every now and then.
“of course… and I want that bugger to see this news and die out of jealosy” misha cursed Khushi’s husband.
“Stop it mish! There is no point thinking about him today. This is ou… my day”, Khushi bit back our. “and I don’t want to spoil it by thinking about such a negative person who doesnot hold any importance in my life any more”.
“Really?” Khushi heard a familiar voice. No matter how many times she had heard his voice, each time she heard him saying her entire nervous system collapsed. Khushi closed her eyes cursing her vulnerability and turned towards him.
There he was standing right beside her. His mouth held the sexiest smirk, clean-shaven which actuated his pink lips. “Ridiculous” Khushi thought thinking about how on earth a man posses such a pink lush lips and each time her gaze went towards his thin, manly lips her pulse danced erotically.
Before Khushi could say anything her lips were covered with his for a welcome kiss. He realized reluctantly only to find a dazed Khushi flattering her lashes unknowingly. Her cheeks blushed with the cutest colour of red, which enhanced her beauty. He did not care that he was kissing a woman on road publically all he cared was that he waited to kiss her for so long. And when it happened the craving became more. “Damn you Khushi” he mentally said. “how can I want a woman like an adolescent desperate teenager?” he thought looking at the beautiful lady clad in a nude colour neat saree. Her hair drew up in a formal bun and she wore a beautiful white stone ear tub. Her face had minimal make up and her peach lip-stick “tsk tsk” became the victim of his mouth few seconds back.
Khushi just couldnot move from his grip, her legs turned into jelly and her every nerve screamed wanting him to touch her again, kiss her again… kiss her till the world ends and beyond. “oh how much she missed him”, she thought.
“I am going to kiss you again”, he husked.
“No” Khushi protested in a small voice, her eyelids automatically getting closed in the temptation and her lips parted to welcome his manly tongue.
When there lips were inches apart there was a tug in arnav’s hand.
“Finish this later to night both of you. Reporters are coming here, stop your road show you despos” misha bit out her lips feeling concerned for both of them.
Arnav moved back and held Khushi tightly who was about to faint any moment and cleaned the smudged lipstick.
He gave a side hug to misha and said “thanks” before the reporters finally came and surrounded them for their interview.
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They were inside Raizada mansion and the party was on after the main event. The event went well and she was introduced to anjali, arnav’s sister. She immediately liked her a lot. She was a soothing woman. Her words felt like some rag chanted during the morning hours. They immidately bonded and started talking. Just when anjali offered Khushi some mocktail their gaze fell on a beautiful lady clad in a silver dress. Her bosoms spilled rightly over her bodice making a perfect cleavage and her elegant feet gave away the right view between the slits.
“Lavanya Kashyap”, she was the woman to die for Khushi noted. Despite of her ooh-lala come on baby attitute she had an elegant body language which protected her from all the men eyeing on her.
Khushi felt a knot inside her belly. What was she competing with? The girl in front of her oozed sex and no other woman in anrav’s past could have took that place on which lavanya was standing and she was perfect. Khushi acknowledged with a heavy heart.
Arnav approached Lavanya and air kissed her and then holdong her hand he walked towards Khushi. For the moment Khushi thought the glass would break into pieces the one anjali had offerend. Her hand itched to spill the entire mocktail on arnav’s face in anger. But she resisted.
Arnav came and stood right infront of Khushi holding lavanya’s arms and then introduced lavanya to her.
Lavanaya gracefully pulled out her hand to shake and Khushi unwillingly captured. Both the ladies air kissed each other before Khushi excused herself and started walking towards misha. Before she reached where misha was sitting, Arnav came and held her arms and spun her around crashing her on his hard plain of chest. Khushi’s eyes went wide and she stared at Arnav like she has seen some horror film.
“Saree with backless blouse…kisko marne ka irada hai?” Arnav finally broke their so called silence for long and asked her holding her pallu in one hand and another hand wrapped around her bare waist.
Khushi came back to her senses and glared at Arnav in anger. “haan to?” Khushi turned back to see lavanya smiling with Anjali and said “I guess she has better things to so you and I am sure you are al most dead by now…arenot you Mr Raizada?”
Arnav pulled her more towards him this time his fingers splayed over her bare back and the other hand touched the band of her petticoat around her waist making her shiver by his touch.
“you cant do this Arnav. We are in public”, Khushi tried to hid her flatter.
“As you say, lets finish it in my room”, with that he pick her up in his arms and walked straight towards his room.
The only person to see them was misha as Khushi had waved her before Khushi’s encounter by Arnav.
Khushi tried to protest in his arms, but all went in vail.
“no point trying princess to night you are mine”, Arnav growled at her to shut her up and pushed the door with his leg and in no time he deposited Khushi on his bed.
Khushi tried to get up and run towards the door but pushed the door shut with his palm trapping her between his palm in the process.
Khushi spun around only to be shocked to see the desire in his eye. It was not only desire but some mind of dangerous rage too.
Khushi shivered in fear because she knew what he was capable of when he was angry.
“No, you cannot touch me”, Khushi said in a low voice fearing of herself that if he touches her she will loose all her senses.
The rest of her pleas crashed passionately in his firey kiss. He was hungry…damn hungry for her and it was evident.

 Evil me cliff hanger ROFL...

153 comments:

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    1. aarrrrreee delayed by few seconds damn the slow net
      well it was an all rouder update
      emotional,steamy,hot,sad everything in perfect amount
      waiting for the next :)

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  2. Damn, dis is so scandalous... Poor Arshi dnt talked 2 eachother Verbally for so long... Arnav's desperation 4 her ws flattering... Khushi's backless blouse made him Jealous... He dragged her out 2 his room??? Tym 4 sum more confrontation or Passion??? Will b waiting.... I hate cliffhangers... Grrr..

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  3. no matter how far they are...
    they can t help but feeling empty not being in each others arms..
    arnav s surely turned on with the way she s dressed and the 2 weeks wait is just added to it..
    cliff hanger...kyun:(
    superb update *claps*
    update the next soon dear:)

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  4. Amazing update........
    Loved it.......
    How cn u stop der bt.....:-(:-(
    Update soonnn plzzzzz.....
    Nw gng to read d update once again....;-);-)
    nirmal1992

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  5. o my .............. update chaiyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  6. This cliffhanger is killing me! :( [IF: Arshisarunfan]

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  7. damn it awesome update....
    they cant just control their feeling, it is beyond repair and they also know that whatever happen or happening something is surely connects them
    very well written yaar... loved it *claps*
    what the appy!!? how could end like this :'( why?
    next update plz soon :)

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  8. Evil Appy how could you...


    GoGreen

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  9. do you want us to kill you??
    cliffhanger really??
    anyways...
    the whole update was fab...
    they are tired of running away...
    but still they are not brave enough to confess the same...

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  10. What this Arnav is really up to?
    He tries to avoid from entering into a relationship with her saying that he still loves his wife, where he himself knows that it is not the truth anymore.
    What he expects? does he want to have her as his gf for his whole life,wired.
    Why he is so scared to give a name to their relationship, I am confused.
    But whatever it is he is making this really hard to her.

    It was an awesome update Di
    Loved the way Arnav teased her

    Of course you are a cliffhanger
    Update soon Di

    Take Care

    bluesobti IF

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  11. That was an amazingg update!!!

    Their passion is soo palpable
    Lol wonder how khushi resisted herself from splashing the drink all over lavanya n arnav!!

    Hope things get well real soon
    Amazinggg update!!!

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  12. Its killing me pls update soon I'll loving it

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  13. They definitely can't stay away from each other

    oh crap!!! Arnav walked out of his own party to his room with Khushi in his arms!!!!!

    hmm now passion or anger? or is it passionate anger?

    damn!!! cliffhanger, update soon

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  14. Dear I am orchids8888 from IF. I am happy to know that you updated.I loved the update. Beautiful.

    I cannot understand Arnav. One minute he tells Khushi to leave and another minute he makes love to Khushi.

    Arshi's passion and love for each other is beautiful. I really hope Arnav comes to know that he loves Khushi. Arshi are made for each other.

    Please update dear.

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  15. They can't live without each other.. They are so in love...<3
    Cliffhanger....:-(
    Continue soon...

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  16. awesome updatee
    ahh a cliffhanger
    cant wait for the next update
    arnav is desperate for her

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  17. how can you leave us hanging like this.
    do continue soon.
    loved your update

    ajoop
    IF

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  18. Awesome.. Arnav want his lady back in his life.....
    He is Rimanceing with her in public..
    Wow.. he scooped her in party & took her in his bed room.....
    What next?? I donot like this clife hanger....
    now update soooooonnnn....

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  19. Awesome.. Arnav want his lady back in his life.....
    He is Rimanceing with her in public..
    Wow.. he scooped her in party & took her in his bed room.....
    What next?? I donot like this clife hanger....
    now update soooooonnnn....

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  20. wow! awesome part.....
    oho they r playing avoiding game...
    but both r more hungry fr each other.....
    arnav lied to khushi....
    khushi denied arnav doesn't loves her...
    misha knows everything...
    smart girl...
    arnav kissed khushi publicly...
    khushi so jealous of la...
    arnav took her to the room...
    they r gonna making love?
    i know they r not...
    a huge fight will hpn..
    update soon.....

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  21. Don't you think you praise Lavnya so much.... I mean she is nothing in front of Khushi..
    & Ya... one song realy suits in this situation...
    The song "Ruck ja o dil dewane" from movie DDLJ (Dil wale Dulhania Le jayenge...)

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  22. rimi(rimirocks)22 July 2013 at 22:20

    i didnt understand,khushi was there for an interview together at raizaada mansion,okay,anjali and lavanya was there too,khushi saw lav as her comprtition means she still arnav's reported fiance,and then suddenly arnav swept her off her feet in front off smiling anjali and LAVANYA????and then the "FIANCE" thing,i didnt get it,pls will u explain

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    1. wait for the next chappy... and khushi didnot come for interview :o when did i write that? it was the stone lying ceremony na

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  23. Amazing update.............loved it

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  24. Oh no oh no... y u stopped at that point.... i loved how they craved for each other.. but what does future holds?

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  25. Dam ASR you are an idiot lol Loved the update dear

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  26. hmm, its summer here with devilish hot weather. and now if u keep ur readers in hanger outside, they'll surely become the stinky dried fish ( in Bengali u know shutki) .... pls dont hang up longer

    BTW, when will u reveal the real twist of the tale?

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    1. but i have heard that the more it dries the better it tastes :D

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  27. hmm, its summer here with devilish hot weather. and now if u keep ur readers in hanger outside, they'll surely become the stinky dried fish ( in Bengali u know shutki) .... pls dont hang up longer

    BTW, when will u reveal the real twist of the tale?

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  28. This totally brutal Appy leaving us like when you gave us such a Fantastic update.
    Got a little confused what to mean by "The rest of her pleas crashed passionately in his fiancé kiss"
    is something I have missed ? please update soon other wise in couple of days you people dieing of curiosity. LOL

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  29. Oh god waiting for the next...& today's up date awesome.....!

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  30. Nyc update...... thnx....
    Btw watz d gret mystery???
    eagerly waitin 4 it

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  31. awesome update:)
    one doubt...will khushi's husband will come????
    n pls clear dis arnav -la thing pls..:)

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    1. yes he will come :/ uska epsiode abhi bhi baki hai

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  32. Ahhh Appy!
    Ur evil!:P
    Cliffhanger!!!!:P

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  33. this is not fair appy....u left us in between....
    arnav carried khushi in front of everybody and nibody noticed¿ aise kaise ho sakta hai....hoping that there will be some pics of arnavs wife in his bedroom and hope it will be khushis....update soon yaar....mujse ye wait karna nahi hota hai

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  34. Ryte evil u ... :'( aisa cliff hanger uffff.... I love each n every part of dis update n gal the way u described the hunger of both its just splendid .... Plz plz do update soon or r u gng to give an extension?

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  35. - kamalapushpa(IF)

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  36. I just loved it plz update sooon,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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  37. i simply fail to understand y arnav lied to khushi and now wat he is playing at by acting like this with her!

    he seems to be pretty cozy woth lavanya but still is flirting and keeps on wanting khushi! complicated man!

    atleast misha is more sensible and is clearly able to see the awesome love which both arnav and khushi are continuously denying!

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  38. DAMN U APPY
    U CANT DO THIS TO US.........
    TRS DAMN DAMN AWESUM PART
    PLSSS PLSSSSSS PLSSSS UPDATE FAST

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  39. WOW .. that was MIND BLOWING update .. WHY U END iT LIKE THAT APPY :(( plz plz post it soon cant wait to read wut gone happen next ..

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  40. I think arnav is khushi's husband and maybe arnav knows it...

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  41. Wow....Really like this update :)
    They both love each other madly.
    But who is Lavanya?
    And about Khushi's husband...now my doubt is clear it's nt Arnav and according your reply - - he will come..:( oh no :)
    waiting for the more
    thanks for a b'ful update

    Shilpa Das(FB)

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  42. Wow Wonderful update yar
    Misha knows both Arnav and khushi Loving ech other
    Wat is LA doing in the Party
    OMG Appy How could u do this yar Plz update soon dear PLz PLz

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  44. Beautiful update
    i thing Arnav lied about his wife

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  45. 😡😡😡😡 truly u r evil.... Why u stop here...
    i guess now big fight will coming up....
    hey la n Anjali didn't noticed it when he took khushi in his room.. After all this is function for their deal na... Strange.... Really waiting for next part...
    btw... Who is arnav's late wife??
    thanks dear...

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  46. Great update - they are so missing each other - can't believe arnvv is being so possessive about khushi after all that happenned and the way he sent her away!! so complicated this 'love' thing (amanram)

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  47. Nice update

    rohinid (IF)

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  48. both are desperate for each other
    khushi is showing her jealousy to arnav,
    u left us to hang on
    ITS_LEENA

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  49. great update,, i am amazed by the way you narrate your stories, the way they are missing each other, eagarly waiting for the next update

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  50. Evil APPY ROFL!!!!! Now now Appy, enough of the teasing. Like I said you are killing us with this cliffhanger, you naughty girl.

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  51. Awesome update but you certainly are evil.
    You left it on a cliff-hanger.
    Pouting here!
    Now we all have to wait.

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  52. hayeeee dis is simply yet again another mindblowing chappy....!
    Oh godddd i am loving dis arnav....!
    The way he was behaving wit khushi as if he has owned her was simply beautifully written....!
    Khushi's love for him has been beautifully potrayed....!
    Their passion nd love r evident throug their actions....!
    So finally arnav took d step forwrd coz he by now knws dat he is in love wit khushi nd khushi also shares d same feelings for him....
    Nd there he is all set to mark her as his again....!
    Nd whom is khushi kidding..????
    She very well knws it that one mer touch from arnav nd she will submit herslf to him....!
    Hayeeee i am in kove wit dis chappy....!
    Loved it to bits....!
    Awsum simply awsum....!

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  53. Itttt wasss extremely awsummmm!!!!!!!!
    Thanx alot,,,,,,,,,,!!!!!
    But dis cliff hanger is killing us :(
    Plzzzzz next update soooonnnn!!!!!
    Dat will be a huge favour.... Arshi is making
    Us mad.....

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  54. are you planning to kill me Appy...

    a dangerous cliffhanger, i tell u...

    pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez update sooon hon..

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  55. yess! u r evil! very evil!!
    i think the lavanya episode is over...already!
    whats say?

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  56. cheval

    omg both r sooo in love n they cant express it n both r married in past bt will kushi tell him now i hope yes

    wat is asr upto ??? plz plz update more sooon lz plz

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  57. They love each other soo much why cant both of them keep their ego aside and just admit it. They are torturing them self and each other.
    La has no importance in arnavs life and i hope kushi realises that soon.
    And plz update soon!!!!

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  58. Damn awesome update Appy. Plssss update soon

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  59. what is happening ?what is he upto?
    la was their everything is confusing there
    interesting update
    plz update soon can't handle cliffhanger

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  60. Why you stop there...this is not fair to us....They love each other so much why can't they both keep their ego aside and just admit it...Love you dammit...what happened to Lavanya and his engagement...maar hi dalo ke kya....amazing update.

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  61. Haaaaw Hawwww hawwwwwww appy what's this :'( awesome update.. Please update soon my evil Appy :D

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  62. nice update.....too many things in one update......their avoiding each other....at the same time missing,or rather wanting each other.....misha is a smart girl....she knows everything.....wow their kiss.....meeting Anjali....then Lavanya.....jealous Khushi.....Arnav's taking her to his room.....now what.......update soon.....

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  63. Fantastic update.
    Poor arnav and Khushi staying in front of each other and can't even talk and touch each other. It very difficult to do so.
    But what is in arnav's mind. He took her to his room when his fiancé down there.
    You stop at the right time. Really bad.
    Update soon.
    Thanks for the update.


    Archnahardik123 (IF)

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  64. Gr8!!
    It feels like after eons appy!! :(

    I read 19 and 20 in one go!
    awesome twist! it was kinda anticipated ... but never thot that he thot his wife was dead! hmm ... toh yeh raaz kab khulega?

    Chap 20 was too amorous! liked it!
    ab aagey kab update karne ka iraada hey? :)

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  65. Loved it.. They both can't stay apart, both have been longing to be in each other's arms..It would have taken lot of control for Arnav and Khushi to keep off their hands..Khushi had dressed to kill with a saree and a backless blouse.. so Arnav lost his control and quenched his thirst, he was hungry for her and he picked her up to his bedroom... he is going to mark her as his again after 2 weeks of separation. Khushi would once again submit herself willfully as soon as she feels his touch on her, which she is missing.. what a cliff hanger.. how could you do this appy...to many twists and turns to be unfolded in the coming chapters..

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  66. Atlast caught up wid all da chapters..
    Good...
    Story took such a steep turn!!
    Unexpected..

    Rockingsoni (IF)

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  67. not at all fair....a cliffhanger :'( appy arnav has an explanation to do and now u also have to do arggggghhh..... now i have to wait for the next chappy....

    thanx for the update... plssssss continue soon

    amus5 (IF)

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  68. awesome but cliffhanger, cant wait to read (laksh65)

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  69. amazing update dear loved it plz update soonw

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  70. what a update yaar really next update soon plz

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  71. awesome part...good to see them together again...hopefully their misunderstanding will soon be cleared..i have a very strong feeling that arnav and khushi are married but both don't know it...eagerly waiting for more ...continue soon :)

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  72. Wow absolutely smashing n dramatic updates Apply Di.

    I don't know y I feel Khushis husband is no one else than Arnav.


    Sondaryalakshmi.
    IF

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  73. Hey...great update...arnav still has passion for khushi...but ur really evil to stop at life hanger...I don't think khushi will surrender to his passion ATLEAST not not without a fight...

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  74. that was awesome updt

    luvd it

    summaiyasayed(IF)

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  75. Awesome update!!!

    Misha is a great friend!!
    Both were really missing each other a lot, Arnav just couldn't resist!

    What now?
    Loved it!!! Eagerly waiting for next!
    IF - hawa1997

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  76. loved d update.....waiting 4 d next update...

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  77. Fantastic update, Appy! Yes, you are evil for leaving us with a cliffhanger! We are dying to know about Khushi's hubby and Arnav's wife! Still hoping that they are married to each other! Please update soon! I appreciate all your time and efforts. Thank you!

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  78. APPY KYA KAR RAHI HO??? Maar dala!!! Jaldi karo baby!

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  79. awesome update..............

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  80. Amazing update.
    Loved it.
    Hope things get well real soon.
    VYGA89 IF

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  81. are yu going to update today? hope so=]

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  82. Hey great update i read all of it at once and it is awesome, please update soon, and please could you send me updates via email: shamylakhan7@gmail.com, sorry i'm new and i dont know how you send updates to people
    thanks, and great update

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  83. Hey great update i read all of it at once and it is awesome, please update soon, and please could you send me updates via email: shamylakhan7@gmail.com, sorry i'm new and i dont know how you send updates to people
    thanks, and great update

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  84. Hey great update i read all of it at once and it is awesome, please update soon, and please could you send me updates via email: shamylakhan7@gmail.com, sorry i'm new and i dont know how you send updates to people
    thanks, and great update

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  85. awesome update
    love it
    update soon

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  86. Amazing update...
    Arnav s already married... Bt his wife s dead...
    Nd wont ready 2 marry any1 else.
    Then wats Lav doin there..???
    Wat s d relatn b/w them..??

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  87. Pls update soon... :(
    WAITING...........

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  88. i thought he said there was noting between la and him yet she is here in his house with his sister awesome update he loves playing with khushi and she loves him hope he understand his feeling soon

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  89. Appy where are you? Waiting for your update with bated breath. Jaldi karo stop being evil with your cliffhanger and all! Come on hurry up! (kisses and hugs).

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  90. awesum updts...left at cliffhanger...plzz continue sooon

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  91. Caught up with the story after a very long time and read again from beginning till the cliffhanger :)
    Story has progressed beautifully... Both are hiding and lying to each other. They love each other and the passion is palpable when they are together.....
    So what does Arnav plan to do now...that he has carried her to his room in his house in his own party while his supposedly fiancé is also there ..... And the the mystery of his 'dead' wife and Khusi's 'missing' husband.... Are they connected :)
    Will wait for your next update
    Poonam
    IF paaskhanna

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  92. Hey i just love all ur stories and this one is my favourite
    Plzzz update naa i am waitung for ur update u are and awesome writer and an awesome arhi fan
    u rock keep up ur great work

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  93. appyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....whr r u???y no updates.....misssing ur updates terribly.....plssssssssssss update soon..........

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  94. Apppppppppppyyyyyyyyyyy where are you?????? Waiting waiting waiting and waiting dear......please update sooooooooooooooon...

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  95. appppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppy
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    updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu veryyyyyyyyyyy muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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  96. Arre Appy please update for atleast Ananymous' sake!!! Mazaa aa rahi hai na tumhe, ithni pareshaan karke hum sub logon ko? Tsk tsk tsk.

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  97. Plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  98. Cheval

    Hello.dear missing this one so much plz dntnleave us like this plz update sooon

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  99. updaaaaaate im daily leaving a msg pleaseeeeeeeeeeee
    i cant control the suspense

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  100. appy r u alright means health wagra,or busy due to some work?becoz itni dair tau kbi nahe hue phele update mei...hope u doing well...may GOD bless u dear...mis u and ur update...update soone plz

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  101. Hope all is well at your end...because you don't take that long to give us an update...seriously no update this month is making me confuse...please dear update this story....we are waiting dear....

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  102. Itz been over a month now...i am happy that u updated pawn... but i really miss charmer too!
    Plz update soon!
    Wud love to hear from ur side!

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    1. Appy updated pawn??? You don't mean chapter 20?? I haven't seen anything past 19

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    2. Correction, chap 19 will be a new one not 20.

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    3. yes pawn has been updated
      ch 20

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  103. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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    soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    ushankitvc

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  104. Hey Appy, when are you updating this..................please update...............

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  105. Hey appy its been too long. Plsss update :(

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  106. Hey ....been really long...pls update

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  107. Apply I wasn't expecting you to be this late in updating. Are you still in your evil laughing mood?

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  108. when are u going to update..please update soon

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  109. where are you..............plzzzzzzzzzzzz updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  110. awesm updt.
    Wil arnav tell tht he loves khushi?
    He is just using his wife's name to hide his feeling. Nw his wife's place is already taken by khushi.
    But,wht abt khushi's husb? Im a lit bit scary abt it.
    Wht if he want khushi back in his life?
    Wil khushi ignore her husb ?
    So many questions & no answer.
    So updt sn.

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  111. Please update this story too :) as early as you can

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  112. Pl update Appay. ITs already 1 Month

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  113. i know being a girl i should not say this. but i like arnav's dominating nature. so he wants khushi back and scooed her in his arms to take her to his bedroom. i hope nobody has seen them

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  114. loved this part.....

    update soon.....

    thanx for pm......

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  115. nice !!
    thnx for PM !!

    ~Harsha

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  116. Awesome update...loved it so much..arnav can't control his desire any more and take her in front of misha. I have to read starting chapters..i havn't read it..will read it soon before u give next chappy. Thanks a lot for pm dear. Amazing update..can't wait for next chapter.

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  117. appy dear missing the charmer :'(

    amus5(IF)

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  118. wow...jst gr8!!!luv u nd ur works srsly

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  119. plsssssssssssssss update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnn..!!!!

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  120. feeling bad 4 arshi...dey both hav srong feelings 4 each othr n not xpressing it....n wht is arnav playing at instead of taking 2 her n clearing d air he is all set 2 ravish her....eagerly waiting 2 read d nxt update..

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  121. oh ***k...u can't do lyk dis..!!! I am already dead....plz plz plz cmplete it asap

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  122. Amazing <3

    I feel khushi is Arnav's wife :-/

    Update nxt soon pls :-)

    N wts wid lavanya :@

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  123. Awesome n lovely update n loved it!

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  124. fantabulous chapter
    missmk if

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  125. Wow that was Arshilicious delicious
    both Arnav n khushi missing each other so much
    n Arnav planned this day so she couldn't hide from him ...nice
    so Anjali n Lav r both fine with him chosing khushi
    loved how the first moment he saw her not caring where he was he had to kiss her
    poor khushi must have been hell looking at the lass who she thought had stolen Arnav from her
    Arnav lifting her to take her to his room was funny & romantic he def isn't gonna let her go again
    thanks for pm looking forward to next update

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  126. Thanks for the PM. Nice update. Interesting.

    - desisweetheart9 from IF.

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